Essay Problems

I think my biggest problem is fluidity. My paper has some good points in it but I don’t know if it flows well. I think at times what I have written has been a little forced and that I have to b s my way to get length. I hope that I can organize my paper in a way that I can meet the length requirement yet still have solid quotes and evidence that support my thesis. I think I need to work on the most with how to connect my sub-story with other sub-stories and the outer frame. That is where I kind of struggled writing my rough draft and I feel this is where my paper really loses its flow. So hopefully I can work these problems out and get a solid final draft.

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